** APRIL DEAL: A $125 VALUE**
Order FEATURE SCREENPLAY ANALYSIS or 2 COACHING SESSIONS
and receive LIFETIME ACCESS to MY COMPREHENSIVE SCREENWRITING COURSE for FREE.
- An exhaustive read of your feature screenplay ($300) or one-hour pilot ($225).
- Typed page notes throughout your PDF file.
- A multi-page analysis on how to improve the following:
- Hero’s Arc
- Tone and Pace
- Stakes and Rules
- World and Scale
- Anything else that sticks out – or anything you’d like me to target in your script.
*This is not a coverage service. This is specifically designed to help pinpoint and elevate problem areas in your script, in order to prepare you for a full-scale rewrite or polish.
A fantastic way to improve your craft. Bring a page of your screenplay or one-hour-pilot. I will annotate your work on a shared screen, suggesting ways to enhance it.
Alternatively, if you’d like general guidance on screenwriting, I can coach you on the following:
- Craft (White Space, Action Lines, Scene Structure, Rules, Etc.)
- Questions on Seeking Representation