SERVICES:

SCREENPLAY ANALYSIS – $225-$300: 

1. An exhaustive read of your feature screenplay ($300 up to 110 pages) or one-hour pilot ($225 up to 60 pages). 
2. Typed page notes throughout your PDF file.
3. A multi-page analysis on how to improve the following:

• Concept
• Structure
• Hero’s Arc 
• Dialogue
• Tone and Pace
• Craft 
• Stakes and Rules
• World and Scale
• Anything else that sticks out – or anything you’d like me to target in your script.

*This is not a coverage service. This is specifically designed to help pinpoint and elevate problem areas in your script, in order to prepare you for a full-scale rewrite or polish. 

ZOOM SCREENWRITING INSTRUCTION ($75/HOUR):  

I offer follow-up sessions on script analysis, if you have questions about my notes or if you’d like to run rewrite choices by me. Alternatively, if you’d like general guidance on feature screenwriting, I can coach you on the following:

• Concept
• Logline
• Hero
• Theme
• Tone
• World
• Structure
• Dialogue
• Craft (White Space, Action Lines, Scene Structure, Rules, Etc.)
• Questions on Seeking Representation