SCREENPLAY ANALYSIS – $225-$300:
- An exhaustive read of your feature screenplay ($300 up to 110 pages) or one-hour pilot ($225 up to 60 pages).
- Typed page notes throughout your PDF file.
- A multi-page analysis on how to improve the following:
- Concept
- Structure
- Hero’s Arc
- Dialogue
- Tone and Pace
- Craft
- Stakes and Rules
- World and Scale
- Anything else that sticks out – or anything you’d like me to target in your script.
*This is not a coverage service. This is specifically designed to help pinpoint and elevate problem areas in your script, in order to prepare you for a full-scale rewrite or polish.
ZOOM SCREENWRITING INSTRUCTION ($75/HOUR):
I offer follow-up sessions on script analysis, if you have questions about my notes or if you’d like to run rewrite choices by me. Alternatively, if you’d like general guidance on feature screenwriting, I can coach you on the following:
- Concept
- Logline
- Hero
- Theme
- Tone
- World
- Structure
- Dialogue
- Craft (White Space, Action Lines, Scene Structure, Rules, Etc.)
- Questions on Seeking Representation